Hi I am Nicole am a year 5 am a student in papakura central school my favourite hobby is tennis and ten years old and my teachers is whaea and miss tamzin bye.
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Hi Nicole, good work on completing the reading tasks. Maybe next time you can add a description of your post to hook the reader in, add labels and also a closing question for the reader. Adding these few thing will make your blog post higher quality.
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